I worked hard to my full extent and it was a class project. I think my creation is a burning forest. I will accept $6.00 or more.Get your bid in quick,or it will be gone.
I wrote a story. I hope you like it. A boy’s adventure
Once there was a little boy called B. He lived in the desert and loved animals, but he didn’t have any. So he ran off one day. But he was going to come back as soon as he had found a pet. B had been walking for a day, but he had got lost. He said, “Oh my god, I’m lost. Now how am I going to find my way back”? A storm was coming in the distance, it was a sand storm, rumbling like thunder. B saw a cave but he realised that he had to tell his family it was coming. But he had to go in the cave to avoid being buried alive. He ran into the cave as fast as he could run, with his little legs. It was a dark, misty cave. After his journey he was tired, so he went to sleep. The next day he woke up with a sudden jolt of fear. It was still dark but he could see something moving in the distance. It came closer, he had a better picture of it now, but he didn’t want to. It was flesh eating Zombie’s. Their skin hung off their faces like torn wallpaper. He quickly jumped up and started running to the entrance, but it was blocked off with sand. They were getting closer and closer, but he could hear a faint sound calling “ B, B”. He woke up, this time for real. He said, “It was all a dream, Yippy!”
'Scouse' is a Liverpool term for 'Stew'. Its consistency is mushier than a stew however. More like a ‘broth’. It's main ingredients are red meat, potatoes and veg. Lots of pepper gives it a kick...A bit like the next bidder if I don't win this art work!!Ha Ha. I raise my bid to $10.22.
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18 comments:
I will place a bid at $6.50.
Caroline Milligan
I will bid $7.00. Great work Ben.
Janette Norddahl Payne
Hi it is amazing! I will pay $ 7.00
I will bid $7.50. Fingers crossed!!
Mrs Milligan
I will bid $8. I thing it is amazing!!
Grandad
Just amazing, I will bid $8.00
Grandad
Just amazing, I will bid $8.00
Ulfar Norddahl
Just amazing, I will bid $8.00
Ulfar Norddahl
Just amazing, I will bid $8.00
Grandad
I wrote a story. I hope you like it.
A boy’s adventure
Once there was a little boy called B.
He lived in the desert and loved animals, but he didn’t have any. So he ran off one day.
But he was going to come back as soon as he had found a pet.
B had been walking for a day, but he had got lost.
He said, “Oh my god, I’m lost. Now how am I going to find my way back”?
A storm was coming in the distance, it was a sand storm, rumbling like thunder.
B saw a cave but he realised that he had to tell his family it was coming.
But he had to go in the cave to avoid being buried alive.
He ran into the cave as fast as he could run, with his little legs.
It was a dark, misty cave.
After his journey he was tired, so he went to sleep.
The next day he woke up with a sudden jolt of fear. It was still dark but he could see something moving in the distance.
It came closer, he had a better picture of it now, but he didn’t want to.
It was flesh eating Zombie’s. Their skin hung off their faces like torn wallpaper.
He quickly jumped up and started running to the entrance, but it was blocked off with sand.
They were getting closer and closer, but he could hear a faint sound calling “ B, B”.
He woke up, this time for real. He said, “It was all a dream, Yippy!”
By Ben.
I will raise my bid to $8.50. Fingers crossed :o)
Mrs Milligan
A masterpiece!!
I bid $9.
I MUST HAVE IT FOR MY COLLECTION!!
Hard economic times won't prevent me from raising my bid once again.
$9.50.
I will be hiding the computer keyboard from your dad, to prevent him from out bidding me!!
Mrs Milligan
$9.50 for this excellent work of art!
Nanna (and don't outbit me or you won't be getting any scouse for tea next time you're over here!)
Hi Nanna
This is Zita, Ben's teacher.
What is scouse???it's not like mushy peas, is it? It sounds very foreign!!
Wow Ben! What a fight!!!! Go Nanna, you don't want to upset them! Especially if she is going to hold out on the scrouse! (What ever that is!)
Hi Zita,
'Scouse' is a Liverpool term for 'Stew'. Its consistency is mushier than a stew however. More like a ‘broth’. It's main ingredients are red meat, potatoes and veg. Lots of pepper gives it a kick...A bit like the next bidder if I don't win this art work!!Ha Ha.
I raise my bid to $10.22.
Hey Ben have a nice trip
Ella and marc
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