Monday, November 10, 2008

Fire - Sophie

this is my free verse selling at the price of $3.00
this is how my free verse sounds like:

Fire in the trees
it makes you feel so scary the bats and the crows are burning death danger deers
antlers are burning like anger bombs dropping and snakes appearing death
A wearing doom beyond shells and gone
when the fire goes away the fire is going away

14 comments:

Anonymous said...

Nice one!!!!!!

Bunny said...

Awesome poem and painting Sophie! Got my bid!!

Bunny said...

Would love to open the bidding at $3.00. Good work Soph. Mum

Bunny said...

Need this one for my art collection Soph. Will place a bid of $3.50. Phoebe

Bunny said...

Some hot bidding going on here Soph. Will outbid Phoebe by 50cents so you've got my bid at $4.00! Hannah

Bunny said...

Hi Soph awesome art work and poem. Need to win this one for the family collection! I'll bid $5.00. Dad

Anonymous said...

cool artwork sophie!

Bunny said...

Hi Sophie, would love to have your painting hanging up on our wall. I'll bid $5.00. Love Grandpa David

Anonymous said...

Hi Soph, Granny margaret here. I think your painting is beautiful and vibrant and what an awesome poem. I bid $10.00.

Anonymous said...

Hi Soph, Granny Margaret here. Love your painting and poem! I bid $10.00

Anonymous said...

Pure genious! Vibrant and stunning work of art! My bid -$12.00.

Bunny said...

Hi Sophie, the biddings really taking off now! I bid $14.00. Love Mum

Tu Meke Ruma Whetu said...

Dear Mum,
Thank you so much for your bid.
Love Sophie.

Anonymous said...

Thankyou Mum meet at the office
And come to the class and retrive you painting.




From Sophie.A