Here is how my free verse sounds like:
look at me
look at the BIG big SMOKEY sky.
All the hills in the distance
>looked all BURNT
It looks like a VOLCANO is about to EXPLODE!
>I can see in the distance,
the end of WORLD WAR 2
Just like the BOMBS have just gone off.
I think all the sticks are burnt,
from the WAR.
By Courtney
4 comments:
hi room7 how are you? its my birthday on sunday and im going to h20. from dylan
Awesome Court I might bid
later.
Ashleigh
Excellent work Courtney. I love your free verse. I would like to bid $10 please.
Love Mum and Dad
Thanks mum and dad u have won my painting you will need to go to the office and pay the money then u will need to pick your picture up from room07
from Courtney
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